that was insane! it must of taken you a very long time to make a cartoon of this caliber. Great job! keep up the good work!
I haven't seen one helpful review yet >:(
Well I will give you some 'constructive criticism' :). Okeedokee, so first off, there was not much animation, a few lipsync parts, and some tweens, but you know where I am going. If you added more movement to it, there would be less jackasses commenting smack about it. Your characters were very bland, they could almost be related to a stickman with dimension. Try using shading, or more symbols, or FBF or something, to help make your characters look more alive. Also, the context of the flash itself is quite poor, but a good effort. You would really need to make it longer, and have more jokes, and gags. Otherwise, a gave you a 5 for a quality attempt at a flash project, and I am guessing that you put a lot of work into this, so I'm not going to be a jerk. Let me know if you've made any improvements.
If you manage to make a whole cartoon using this quality of sprite animation, i will make sure to watch it. I also appreciate your use of sound effects, I find that they are used very well
keep up the good work
pretty good guys
This is a very good, decent quality submission and I thank you for posting it.
Have a Good day to all of you!
i liked it
i really liked this movie and thought a lot of effort was put into it.
the music selections were great, and the story was pretty sweet as well.
maybe for #2 u cud improve the drawing a bit but apart from that i'd like to say that I enjoyed this and i am definitely looking forward for #2!
this was pretty sweet
ur animation fluidity (if that is a word) is very good
its ok but...
it lacks speed, and audio.
otherwise this is a very good start
keep up the excellent work
Thank you. That was actually a pretty helpful review. And I agree, the audio sucks. however my computer lacks good quality speakers and it is difficult to record good sounds.
this was really sweet and i really enjoyed it
Good to hear ^^
this was epic
the animation was good and fluid
the design and style are sweet as well
the only thing i didnt like about it compared to the first, was the choice of music.
cant wait for #3
it was pretty sweet
i quite was entertained and the sprites were all trimmed and polished very nicely
though the first time he said "objection!" it made me jump so thats the only down part for me.
keep up the good work
Thanks for your review :)
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